NAME : I GEDE WAHYU WIDIYATMIKA PUTRA
NIM : 1212021041
CLASS : IIIB
Outline
Paragraph Free Hugs Campaign by: Wida Aryastina (itsmewida.blogspot.com)
Title : Feel Free to Get
a Free Hugs
Topic Sentence :
The
Free Hugs Campaign is a social movement involving individuals who offer hugs to
strangers in public places. The hugs are meant to be random acts of kindness,
selfless acts performed just to make others feel better.
a.
Major supporting
sentence 1 :
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In this video there are
a man who hold sign “free hugs” and walk away in the downtown, at first the
people do not care and are not enthusiastic about the man, the people let him
walk away and did not care even though he hold sign “free hugs”.
Minor supporting
sentence :
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During the man walked,
some people just watched him, took his picture and passed him.
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People didn’t give
their respond to him.
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At the first, what he
brings doesn’t make sense for the people.
b.
Major supporting
sentence 2 :
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The event begin when a
grandmother who initially spoke with him and eventually grandmother was
interested of the event and hugging him.
Minor supporting
sentence :
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It was his the first hug after he through that way.
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Then, some people
around him one by one walked close to him and they hug each other.
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Next, some of people
tried to bring that sign and hug each other.
c.
Major supporting
sentence 3 :
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The man looks so happy
because many people cares with him, but at the time police approached to
the man and banned free hugs
and next the man was looking for a signature to
everyone for supporting his free hugs and want to prove that free hugs make the
others feel better.
Minor supporting
sentence :
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They are many people
interested and the man got 10.000 signatures
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He was succeed.
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In
the end the police permitted the man to continue his free hugs because the man
successful and got so many respond.
Concluding
sentence :
This
video are very important and so many people interesting with this sign and make
the people cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is
symbolized of love. So let's get a free
hugs today.
Grammar :
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This video are very
important and so many people interesting with this sign and make the people
cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized
of love
-
This video is very important. Many people interesting with this sign can make people cares
because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized of love
Vocabulary : pemited = permitted/went
= approached
Mechanic : Good
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