Friday, November 15, 2013

Feel Free to Get a Free Hugs

NAME        : I GEDE WAHYU WIDIYATMIKA PUTRA
NIM            : 1212021041
CLASS       : IIIB
Outline Paragraph Free Hugs Campaign by: Wida Aryastina  (itsmewida.blogspot.com)

Title                             : Feel Free to Get a Free Hugs
Topic Sentence            :
The Free Hugs Campaign is a social movement involving individuals who offer hugs to strangers in public places. The hugs are meant to be random acts of kindness, selfless acts performed just to make others feel better.
a.         Major supporting sentence 1        :
-          In this video there are a man who hold sign “free hugs” and walk away in the downtown, at first the people do not care and are not enthusiastic about the man, the people let him walk away and did not care even though he hold sign “free hugs”.
Minor supporting sentence           :
-          During the man walked, some people just watched him, took his picture and passed him.
-          People didn’t give their respond to him.
-          At the first, what he brings doesn’t make sense for the people.

b.        Major supporting sentence 2        :
-          The event begin when a grandmother who initially spoke with him and eventually grandmother was interested of the event and hugging him.
Minor supporting sentence           :
-          It was his the first hug after he through that way.
-          Then, some people around him one by one walked close to him and they hug each other.
-          Next, some of people tried to bring that sign and hug each other.
c.         Major supporting sentence 3        :
-          The man looks so happy because many people cares with him, but at the time police approached to the man and banned free hugs and next the man was looking for a signature to everyone for supporting his free hugs and want to prove that free hugs make the others feel better.
Minor supporting sentence           :
-          They are many people interested and the man got 10.000 signatures
-          He was succeed.
-          In the end the police permitted the man to continue his free hugs because the man successful and got so many respond.
Concluding sentence   :
This video are very important and so many people interesting with this sign and make the people cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized of  love. So let's get a free hugs today.

Grammar         :
-          This video are very important and so many people interesting with this sign and make the people cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized of  love
-          This video is very important. Many people interesting with this sign can make people cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized of  love
Vocabulary      : pemited = permitted/went = approached

Mechanic         : Good

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